The contents should also be reorganized into a proper MOM structure—not just the headings. The revised version should follow this format:
Call to Order
Date, meeting reference, time, venue, and presiding officials
Attendance
College representatives, adviser, officers, and participating organizations
Agenda
Organizational renewal
Introduction of adviser and officers
Plans of action
AI Hackathon
TechIS × JPCS legacy project
SSC collaborations
College activities
DOST partnership
Malaysia study-immersion survey
Other matters
Matters Discussed
Each agenda item presented as a numbered discussion
Important details, decisions, and recommendations included
Unconfirmed plans clearly marked as proposed, subject to approval, or under development
Agreements and Action Items
Task
Responsible person or organization
Deadline, if available
Status or required follow-up
Other Matters
ASEAN Voyage volunteers on August 12
Freshmen orientation beginning August 17
Professional conduct among organizations
Participation in external activities
Adjournment
Meeting adjourned at 6:20 PM
Documentation and Certification
Prepared by
Reviewed by
Noted by
Meeting reference
The important missing part in the current draft is a clear Agreements and Action Items section. I would include these key actions:
Complete and submit organizational-renewal documents.
Revise the TechIS and JPCS Plans of Action.
Coordinate with the SSC and other organizations to prevent duplicated activities.
Finalize the AI Hackathon title, theme, mechanics, schedule, venue, participants, partners, technical requirements, and budget.
Create borrowing, rental, maintenance, and accountability procedures for the TechIS × JPCS speakers.
Coordinate the career and networking activity with the Internship/OJT Coordinator.
Conduct the Malaysia study-immersion survey and submit the list of interested students.
Identify JPCS volunteers for the ASEAN Voyage.
Assist with freshmen orientation beginning August 17.
Confirm dates, committees, partners, funding, and approval requirements for all proposed activities.
I can revise the entire contents into this proper format, but the edit requires your confirmation in Fabric first—the tiny administrative gatekeeper is being dramatic.